Friday 14 March 2008

Remember?

So when you took
My hand-

[After stealing my heart,
With my hand too, I had to part!]

What
did you feel,
I asked, remember?

I'm holding my world in my hand,
You said, remember?

Did I feel lost?
You asked, I remember.

How could I?! I retorted,
Remember?

In the circle of your Love-
Led by the hand,
I finally found me,
In Us.





Usha, 22 September,'07

2 comments:

  1. In the circle of your Love-
    Led by the hand,
    I finally found me,
    In Us.



    an all time favourite mam...no matter how many times I see it,I can comment on this each time..it radiates same freshness,same grace and the uncommonly togetherness as I had sensed the first time and that nothing else can...

    Wonderful..God bless !!

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  2. I loved the subtlety,the format.Specially, the last 4 lines,worth a round of applause :)
    Lovely write:)
    Thanks Soumya :)

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